A bit cluttered
The melody is alright, but very repetitive, so it gets boring quite quickly. Try adding more variety.
As many other people have pointed out, there are too many things going on, slightly out of time, so it sounds a bit cluttered and messy. You don't need loads of instruments to make a good song, so maybe try and cut down on some of them..
The ending was quite nice and fitting, so good work on that bit.
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For a dance song, it was really good.
The beat was really good, but a small bit generic...The melody was quite good at the start, but after a while it got repetitive and boring. Try to vary the melody a bit, it'll make a massive difference.
I loved how the ending looped back to the start completely seamlessly, this was a song, not a loop, so there was no need to do that, and I'm not even sure if it was intentional, but it was a nice touch.
I'm not a fan of dance, but you paid attention to detail, and it feels much more polished than many songs. Good job.
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Let down by the guitar.
I really liked the beat, but that was what redeemed it thee most points. The guitar went downhill pretty much from the moment it came in. It was far too screechy, and, although on the last 2 tracks I said it was too quiet, but I think it was too loud this time.
The intro, before the guitar came in, was really nice and reminded me of Radiohead, but, as I said earlier, the guitar let it down.
I kinda like the outro too, it's quite original and interesting.
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When I add vocals I think I'll put the melody/solo guitar lower in the mix.
Thanks!
Vocals were a bit disappointing.
I didn't really like how it took 2 minutes to build up to the vocals. You kept on thinking that they woul like a letdown, because they weren't anything special. You overused the same line for the whole song, and it got boring in the end, even though you tried to add as much variety to it as possible.
The overall beat was quite good, so that helped it move along.
The outro was really nice, and gave it a great ending.
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It's called progression......
Much better than Coming Home
There was a definite Nirvana feel to it, which was really nice. Oonce again, try to make the guitar more prominent, but I quite liked the other istruments here, especially the bass in the intro.
The guitar riff about 5/6 of the way though was sweet, and added a new dimension to it.
This time, the outro wasn't too good. try to do something better than just fading out. It didn't really suit the flash.
The first song by Daisy Chain got an 8 from me, this gets a 9. I better go and review the 3rd and hopefully give it a 10.
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Needs vocals.
There isn't too much to say here, as its a pretty good song. However, there isn't really anything that makes it very interesting. It kinda drags on, and would be majorly improved with vocals. At about 1:00, it got pretty messy, but got better soon afterwards.
The drum beat could be a bit more interesting, and you could increase the volume of the guitar to make it more recognisable. After all, you say you're centred on guitar riffs..
The outro was nice, and provided a fitting end to it.
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Yes, definitely vocals.
Drums will be altered if I ever start this from scratch at a later date.
Which guitar, the rhythm guitar or melody/solo guitar?
Great vocals.
The overall song was nice. It's very relaxing, but still exciting. I thought it was gonna be another generic song that was repetitive, but the vocals saved it. They were great. Even though the lyrics were pretty limited, they still carried the song.
I always encourage people to have original outros, but I didn't think the tempo change worked very well, but the last line with the "Together" was very nice, and a fitting end.
I wasn't too keen on that sucking instrument. I don't know what it was, but it was weird, and didn't add much to the song.
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Generic
If there's one music genre I hate more than any other it's techno, but I'll still try and review with an open mind..
The intro was pretty generic, and it sounded just like any other techno song. Like Fro said, it was best at about 0:50, but even then, it got all clogged up and sounded messy. Pretty much the whole song sounded the exact same, with nothing really breaking the monotony.
The ending was seemed fairly decent, but you could still have done something a bit more original with it.
Maybe I just don't get this genre. Either way, it wasn't my cup of tea.
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well everyone has their own views toward different genre. and obviously you didnt like this one, which i can respect considering its different for everyone. Though the rating of 3 didnt help :( your entitled to your opinion. Thanks for the review :)
Relaxing..
I liked the overall sound of this song, it was very relaxing and calm. The lyrics, although completely nonsensical, fitted, and were kinda funny. The actual voice was kinda annoying, but nothing too bad. There's not really much else I can say, but you should try make it longer and add some interesting solo.
That static at the end it horrible. Why is it in there? It pretty much ruins the whole song..
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Thanks for the review! The static appeared when I converted it from .aiff to mp3. Dunno why it appears.
Repetitive.
I really liked the intro, I'm not sure what it was, but something about it really appealed to me. I guess I just like piano, or variations of it.
However, the rest of the song didn't quite live up too expectations. It was quite good, until you got through 2 minutes of it, and it all sounded the same. Try to add a bit more variation in. I didn't really like when you used the claps. They always sound boring and generic to me.
The ending wasn't too bad, but you could have cut it off at 4:00, instead of leaving 12 seconds of silence at the end.
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repetitive? lol, just be thankful it's not prog house. :P lol, thanks for the review. :)
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