I really liked that paper texture. It gave it that indie feel that many animations on here have.
The animation itself was pretty good...Decent FBF and stuff..Nothing amazing, but it was good enough..
The art sorta let you down though..A lot of it was rough around the edges. I think it would have been better if you had added black outlines to everything.
Not a bad little joke, but slightly clichéd and predictable. Also, it was nice to have the subtitles, but if you're gonna do them, at least spell everything right..Generally, it was alright, but you wrote Lincon Park, whereas it should be Linkin Park, who are awesome by the way :D
The sound quality was quite good, and the voices were great, lots of emotion in it and stuff...The accents weren't very piratey though, and since it was "Talk Like a Pirate Day", they probably should have been...
Not terrible, but not good enough to be a good story, or have excellent animation.
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Didn't really work..
There wasn't anything here that was any good. The characters were pretty simple and boring. The fire effect wasn't bad, but it didn't loop properly. Sometimes, the subtitles went by too quickly to read fully.
I didn't find it funny, to be honest..The build up was too slow and boring, and the punchline just wasn't funny enough to even it out.
The music was alright, but didn't add much to the flash..When the third guy came in, the music stopped for a bit too long before the second track came on.
Some voice actors would have been nice too.
It wasn't funny, nor well animated. Nothing appealed to me..
Well even though I do understand what you mean and I will try to listen to most of your advice keep in mind this IS the first Flash I ever made, so it is no surprise why it is so low in quality. Hopefully the next one improved a little, as it is a LITTLE bit closer to what I want it to be. And maybe future episodes will meet standards.
There really wasn't any, whatsoever, except for the occasional change in the face..Which was kinda interesting, but nothing special. Also, the watermark sometimes distracted me from the subtitles.
I know nothing about American Football, so it could have been excellent, or really bad...It seemed quite good, but nothing special. Maybe you just need to make something appeal to a wider audience, as this perhaps appeals to maybe 5% of the NG population.
Some voice acting would have spiced it up a bit. Also, the music didn't really fit the story..
Nothing too special, really. Needs a lot of improvement.
Sprites are renowned for being one of the easiest methods of animating. However, you didn't even do them very well. The running sequences were not synced and there was no weight to it, often when they were standing around, they were jerking about the screen, and it just looked poor. The timing was also pretty bad. Everything went too slowly for my liking.
It was an interesting enough story...Not much plot or subplot or anything to make a properly decent flash, but enough to provide a bit of humour and keep me interested..
A few more sound effects, and possibly a bit of voice would be nice..The music was quite good though, building up well.
You have the bare bones of a good movie, but a lot of work needs to be put into the animation side of it. Good luck.
Well, it was Clock Day..
Well, sprites..what can I say? Considering there is so little going on, wouldn't it have been nice to just to do a bit of proper vector animation for once? I gotta say though, as sprites go, they were pretty good.
Well, there wasn't really one. Also, considering that this was a Clock Day flash, a single clock woulda been nice. Obviously it was just a 2 second loop, so thee really isn't much to judge here.
Well, it's Sonofkirk, so it's obviously awesome, but not really enough to redeem this flash.
I realise that it was a Clock Day flash, and it's supposed to be spam, but that doesn't take away from the fact that it isn't too good..
Lol at how people keep saying it's a loop even though each one was animated at different frame rates and it was actually about 2,000 to 3,000 frames with an ending.
The art was quite nice, but a bit sloppy..The shading was really good though..There wasn't much animation, simply tweens..The animation of Mario's head moving back was a bit jumpy. Try to add in more frames.
It was kinda funny, but not laugh-out-loud..There wasn't really a plot either, and it was really short.
The music wasn't too bad. It didn't fit the flash perfectly, but it was sufficient. There are loads of sad songs on NG, so you could have found a better one.
Not bad, but nothing fantastic.
Much too short.
The lip-syncing was quite good, and the morph wasn't good, except the clothes seemed to completely disappear after a bit.
Well, it was too short to actually take anything in. There was no plot, no humour, nothing really..
The sound quality was fine, the voice acting was acceptable..Nothing really stood out though..
You have potential, but it was too short to even count as a proper movie.
The graphics are pretty shabby. Try using shading and putting in more detail. The animation was also pretty straightforward. However, I liked those music notes on the scale, and the textured BG was also a nice touch.
It really wasn't that funny, to be honest. Also, what happened to the father? He was there at the start, and we never see him again..Strange family..
A bit of BG music would have been nice. Also, the sound quality was really bad.
Generally pretty boring. Certainly nothing special.
The drawings were quite good, but a bit of colour would have been kinda nice. There wasn't much animation, it was just tweens, which was a bit disappointing.
Oh god. I may be scarred for life. First off, the story was just ridiculous and horrible, but I guess that's the internet for you..Secondly, the script had a billion grammar mistakes. I'm not sure if that was intentional or not. However, despite it bugging me loads, it kinda made it funnier.
The music was pretty good, but I didn't like how it just cut out at the end of the credits. You could have faded it out really easily. The voice acting was quite good. It sounded a bit like a human Speakonia, which was effective, considering the somewhat spammy nature of this flash.
I will never be able to look at Sonic in the same way ever again.
Some of the drawings of the face were really good, and very realistic. The face wasn't too good, but nothing terrible either. Some of the FBF and effects were really good, so it's a pity you didn't spend more time on the flash and do more FBF, rather than a few tweens.
Short, but funny in a dark way. Of course, it made no sense, but I think that just added to the concept.
The music was quite nice, but the tracks didn't transition smoothly. It would have been nice if they had blended in easier. The fade out at the end was a bit too short as well.
Nice art, but has its flaws.
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