Kinda odd..
It kinda reminded me of The Fresh Prince of Bel-Air at first, but not half as good.
The beat was alright, simple enough. A small melody would have made the song nicer though.
The vocals were interesting..You have the fast-talking bit pretty good, but you don't feel like you're telling a story, merely saying words. I think this takes away from it. Try to add pauses and a bit more emotion.
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Man, I wish I was the Fresh Prince... haha
Pretty awesome
Well, I think it goes without saying that I think you're a great voice actor, since I've hired you for at least one big project of mine.
The best bit was at the end, when you said "I am Mitchell Brown. I am a Newgrounds Voice Actor". It just sounded so genuine and cool.
A lot of the voices sounded like The Simpsons, so interpret that as you wish...
Some of the bits were pretty funny. Not laugh-out-loud funny, but funny enough to make it interesting.
I think it would have been nice to get to hear the individual voices a bit longer, but I suppose that would be hard with the format you chose.
Overall, it was pretty good..
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Ill keep working on it. Thanks!
A bit generic
The beat was pretty good, so was the melody, but something about it sounded pretty generic and repetitive. Despite this, I could still listen to it easily without being bored or annoyed.
The fade out the end was pretty dull. Try and find more original ways to end your songs.
As a previous reviewer mentioned, there was a toe-tapping quality to it, and even though I wasn't that keen on it, I still found myself tapping along, although, knowing me, probably out of time:P
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lol, thank you for the tip about the fade out. Thanks for the review.
Emotional
There is a definite sense of emotion there, and it's really nice. I love the wide range of tone. It would have been nice to get a bit of percussion in there too.
I feel the intro is a bit long and repetitive, but once it gets going it's fine.
I can definitely see this being used in a flash, and possibly one of mine. It has a movie-like quality that I love.
It would have been nice to have a better ending than just fading out, but it doesn't ruin the rest of the song.
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Those are excellent comments that are worthy of consideration, especially regarding repetition. Thank you.
Repetitive.
The beat, which the song centred around, was really nice, and had a distinctive "marching" feel to it. I could actually see it being used in some scene in a flash movie where some robots were advancing on a human city or something.
The main problem I had was that it got pretty boring, because it sounded pretty much the same all the way through. Try to add a bit more variety in there.
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Thanks for a good review) Sorry for late answer, my internet wasn't work...
Nice and relaxed
I liked the calm, relaxed feel to it, and many of the effects and 'ear candy' sounded really nice.
It felt like it suddenly changed the entire mood at about 2 mins, which was disappointing, because I was happy listening to the first bit..It gradually got back to the good bit though, so it was okay :)
The ending seemed a tiny bit lazy..try and have a longer outro, I think it would have worked better.
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Relaxed?
Great!
I loved this submission.
First of all, the humour was excellent. Not only was the actual concept very funny, but many of the lines were really funny as well.
Your vocals were really great too. Nothing I can fault there. Coupled with the music, it had a kinda Green Day feel, I think.
Which brings us on to the music. If you had submitted this with no vocals, it would have almost got top marks anyway. I love that genre anyway, and this was done really well.
Faved.
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I appreciate the connection to Green Day, I like them. I also thank you for liking the background music, you have a good ear, as most people mainly focus on the lyrics. Cheers!
Bad vocals
It started off quite nicely, but when the vocals came in it went downhill. They seemed to be closer to talking than singing, and that wasn't because of the screamy quality. Either way, it just didn't sound good.
I think you could have made the guitar a bit louder, because there was a nice melody there, but it was overpowered by the drums and the vocals.
The endign was quite boring..Try to find more original endings than fading out. It just didn't work in a heavy metal song.
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Ok thanks for the review.
But try listening to our remastered version you might like it more.
Let down by the guitar.
I really liked the beat, but that was what redeemed it thee most points. The guitar went downhill pretty much from the moment it came in. It was far too screechy, and, although on the last 2 tracks I said it was too quiet, but I think it was too loud this time.
The intro, before the guitar came in, was really nice and reminded me of Radiohead, but, as I said earlier, the guitar let it down.
I kinda like the outro too, it's quite original and interesting.
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When I add vocals I think I'll put the melody/solo guitar lower in the mix.
Thanks!
Vocals were a bit disappointing.
I didn't really like how it took 2 minutes to build up to the vocals. You kept on thinking that they woul like a letdown, because they weren't anything special. You overused the same line for the whole song, and it got boring in the end, even though you tried to add as much variety to it as possible.
The overall beat was quite good, so that helped it move along.
The outro was really nice, and gave it a great ending.
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It's called progression......
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