Insanimation's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pizza City]

Pixels <3

Art/Animation: 7/10
I really like pixel art, and this is some good stuff. Maybe a bit more detail in the close-ups would have been nice. The animation is a bit jerky though.

Concept/Gameplay: 7/10
The idea isn't really very original, but at least it's not a mouse maze or a dress-up game :P The handling on the first car is insanely bad, but I suppose that's just made to make you keep playing and upgrade your car.

I liked the character of the bum or whatever he was. What a swell guy :)

To be honest though, I preferred the GTA option, just running around getting caught by the cops. Kinda fun :D

Music/Audio: 9/10
Somehow the song never got boring, and worked perfectly with the tone of the game and the art. The sound effects were also really nice too :)

Overall: 8/10
Good game, but nothing that special.

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[Kingdoms]

Not too easy to pick up..

Art/Animation: 6/10
The art was pretty good, although the hexagons would have been nice with a bit of texture. There wasn't much animation really..That would have been nice.

Concept/Gameplay: 6/10
I think the main problem was that there wasn't good enough descriptions..It was kinda difficult to pick up...All these things kept on happening to no apparent reason..Maybe I'm just a bit slow :P

Whilst it isn't a very original game, it's not on the internet as much as you'd think, so good job with that...

Audio/Music: 8/10
The music, although good, kinda stopped after a bit, and the only way to start them again was to turn music off, then on again..The sound effects were excellent though..

Overall: 6/10
Good game, but a bit hard to pick up..Well, not for me, anyway :P

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[Clock maze game 09]

Needs a lot of work.

Art/Animation: 2/10
The colours were pretty dull, and a few of the gradients you used looked really generic and horrible. Try to draw everything in one continuous line when you're drawing a line or something, otherwise it looks messy and poor. A lot to improve on here.

Plot/Concept: 2/10
Maze games are the most unoriginal concept on Newgrounds, except maybe Dress-Up games. There was nothing in this one that made it stand out. Some of the levels were kinda clever, but nothing a quick right-click or tab didn't reveal instantly. Try to turn off the Tab button at least. I think there might be a few tutorials in AS: Main.

It also looked as if you were trying to include humour into this. Unfortunately, you didn't really pull it off, and it wasn't funny.

Music/Audio: 1/10
Well, there was none. However, I suppose that's better than something reaklly annoying, so you get one point for that. However, it would have been improved with a small bit of nice music wouldn't have gone amiss.

Overall: 2/10
You seem to have a vague understanding of flash, but your next submissions will need to be a massive improvement.

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[Piggy123s flash tutorial]

Oh dear God!

Art/Animation: 0/10
Badly drawn writing, a few generic drawings and the default font. Can this flash do anything right?

Plot/Concept: 0/10
Well, the layout was kinda confusing, and there really wasn't much content. Half the buttons didn't work either..

Audio/Music: -2/10
Seriously, not good. "Flashy" sounded kinda like Alvin and the Chipmunks on a walkie-talkie to a radio being played through a television with no reception. And that ain't a good thing.\

Overall: 0/10
I would give you negative points if I could, but unfortunately, you'll have to settle for 0. Try again. Much harder.

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piggy123 responds:

well this was made quite a while ago

[human actions drawing tut]

There are plenty more, better alternatives.

Art/Animation: 3/10
Well, if you're doing a tutorial, you should really be able to ull off whatever you're trying to do well. You can't. You need to seriously work on your own art before you go telling other people how to do it. The writing was pretty sloppy too. Maybe a font would have worked better.

Plot/Concept: 2/10
Not a horrible idea, but this has been done across the internet by people much more talented than you, so this tutorial is pretty much pointless. Also, try to spell things correctly next time. At the end, it says "Hope it heped". That instantly lowers the quality.

Audio/Music: 7/10
The music was quite nice, nothing really wrong with it, but unfortunately, it didn't do enough to redeem this flash.

Overall: 3/10
You need to know how to do something before you make a tutorial about it. This didn't cut it.

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piggy123 responds:

ok sure

[A Christmas Story SB]

Pretty pointless.

Art/Animation: 5/10
Well, there weren't really any original graphics, simply a still from the movie and text. However, the Christmas font was quite nice. I also liked how you colour-coordinated the sounds.

Plot/Concept: 3/10
Well, I never really got the point of soundboards..They provide no entertainment, they aren't funny, and they aren't very hard to make..

Also, if this is about Christmas, why submit it in the middle of August?

Audio/Music: 4/10
The sound quality was quite good. What annoyed me was that the sounds were too long.

Overall: 4/10
It just doesn't seem to be worth anybody's while really. Pretty pointless.

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Frenzy responds:

I felt like submitting it.

Anyway, thanks

~ Z

[Ultimate NG Quiz]

Needs attention to detail.

Art/Animation: 7/10
Pretty good, and looks very NG-like. At the menu, where you select the level of hardness, the text gets a bit pixelated though. Also, the text on the questions could be much bigger, and there is a lot of negative space. The transitions at the menu were too slow as well. People just want to play the game, not watch some 2-second transition.

Plot/Concept: 5/10
This is a fairly unoriginal idea, really, there are plenty of these flashes which offer pretty much the same thing. The main thing that bugged me with the flash was the way you had to click on the numbers at the bottom instead of the answers. It took longer and was pretty pointless.

Music/Audio: 7/10
I like how you added a choice of music, but you couldn't change it during the quiz, only at the menu, which was annoying. The music itself was quite good though..

Overall: 6/10
Not bad, but is lacking some attention to detail.

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dx5231 responds:

Thanks for the review.
I think I'm going to change the animations between the main menu and the question stuff.
You have to click on the numbers at the bottom because I was kinda lazy to make a shitload of buttons for each answer. Or maybe just 6 invisible buttons.

[The Big Green Button]

Not original at all..

Art/Animation: 4/10
You pretty much had to draw one symbol, so you could at least have put a tiny bit more effort into it. Maybe a bit more variation on the shading and the light patches.

It would also have been nice if you had added a few bits with animation, like the button bouncing all over the place and you had to click it.

Plot/Concept: 2/10
This has been done so many times before it barely even passes as a concept anymore. You didn't really do anything original here. The most original thing I saw was the changing of the colours. I vaguely smiled at some bits as well, but many of the jokes were already done by previous submissions..

Music: 7/10
You didn't use that much music, but that wasn't really needed considering the flash. I liked how you used the music when it was changing colour, that brought a bit of freshness to it. The music at the "surprise" was pretty anoying, but it didn't last for long so it was ok...

Overall: 4/10
Not original enough to be worth the time..

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[TNEJ (art collab)]

Bad art.

Art/Animation: 2/10
There really weren't any pieces which grabbed my attention as being decent whatsoever. Many of them looked like they were done on MS Paint, and I wasn't impressed at all.

Sometimes the images were too small, and I couldn't see the writing in them.

Plot/Concept: 7/10
The actual idea for the thread isn't bad, but not very original. The story had some funny points, but, as you'd expect, not very original.

Sound/Music: 6/10
The music was nice, and quite relaxing. It didn't really seem to go with the story, but it wasn't bad.

Overall: 5/10
You were let down by the art, which, considering it's an art collab, is not a good thing.

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