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[Piggy123s flash tutorial]

Oh dear God!

Art/Animation: 0/10
Badly drawn writing, a few generic drawings and the default font. Can this flash do anything right?

Plot/Concept: 0/10
Well, the layout was kinda confusing, and there really wasn't much content. Half the buttons didn't work either..

Audio/Music: -2/10
Seriously, not good. "Flashy" sounded kinda like Alvin and the Chipmunks on a walkie-talkie to a radio being played through a television with no reception. And that ain't a good thing.\

Overall: 0/10
I would give you negative points if I could, but unfortunately, you'll have to settle for 0. Try again. Much harder.

[Review Request Club]

piggy123 responds:

well this was made quite a while ago

[human actions drawing tut]

There are plenty more, better alternatives.

Art/Animation: 3/10
Well, if you're doing a tutorial, you should really be able to ull off whatever you're trying to do well. You can't. You need to seriously work on your own art before you go telling other people how to do it. The writing was pretty sloppy too. Maybe a font would have worked better.

Plot/Concept: 2/10
Not a horrible idea, but this has been done across the internet by people much more talented than you, so this tutorial is pretty much pointless. Also, try to spell things correctly next time. At the end, it says "Hope it heped". That instantly lowers the quality.

Audio/Music: 7/10
The music was quite nice, nothing really wrong with it, but unfortunately, it didn't do enough to redeem this flash.

Overall: 3/10
You need to know how to do something before you make a tutorial about it. This didn't cut it.

[Review Request Club]

piggy123 responds:

ok sure

[A Christmas Story SB]

Pretty pointless.

Art/Animation: 5/10
Well, there weren't really any original graphics, simply a still from the movie and text. However, the Christmas font was quite nice. I also liked how you colour-coordinated the sounds.

Plot/Concept: 3/10
Well, I never really got the point of soundboards..They provide no entertainment, they aren't funny, and they aren't very hard to make..

Also, if this is about Christmas, why submit it in the middle of August?

Audio/Music: 4/10
The sound quality was quite good. What annoyed me was that the sounds were too long.

Overall: 4/10
It just doesn't seem to be worth anybody's while really. Pretty pointless.

[Review Request Club]

Frenzy responds:

I felt like submitting it.

Anyway, thanks

~ Z

[Ultimate NG Quiz]

Needs attention to detail.

Art/Animation: 7/10
Pretty good, and looks very NG-like. At the menu, where you select the level of hardness, the text gets a bit pixelated though. Also, the text on the questions could be much bigger, and there is a lot of negative space. The transitions at the menu were too slow as well. People just want to play the game, not watch some 2-second transition.

Plot/Concept: 5/10
This is a fairly unoriginal idea, really, there are plenty of these flashes which offer pretty much the same thing. The main thing that bugged me with the flash was the way you had to click on the numbers at the bottom instead of the answers. It took longer and was pretty pointless.

Music/Audio: 7/10
I like how you added a choice of music, but you couldn't change it during the quiz, only at the menu, which was annoying. The music itself was quite good though..

Overall: 6/10
Not bad, but is lacking some attention to detail.

[Review Request Club]

dx5231 responds:

Thanks for the review.
I think I'm going to change the animations between the main menu and the question stuff.
You have to click on the numbers at the bottom because I was kinda lazy to make a shitload of buttons for each answer. Or maybe just 6 invisible buttons.

[PingPongTest]

Bit Boring

Although it all works, it's a bit bland..

Graphics: Boring and nothing special at all..

Sound: Needs music drastically

Gameplay: Everything goes a bit too slow, and the lack of AI makes it impossible to play on your own, unless you play both sides, which is annoying...

But nothing wrong, just nothing right...

littlekidjon responds:

like i said nothing amazing:)
Also when you start losing the ball will start to go faster...untill someone gets 10 points, then they win, but i see your point that it is a bit too slow at the start
Thanks for the comment

[Newgrounds Helpful Guide]

Well..

Not bad..but there were a few things that didn't seem right..

- The graphics. It just didn't look Newgrounds-y enough. Despite you using the font, and the beams, it still looked like a cheap attempt at a Newgrounds style. The title on the menu with the rotating bevel was annoying too.

- Wording. Sometimes the wording seemed a bit weird. Sorta like whoever wrote it didn't spend enough time on the script.

The score calculator was good though. I'll give you that.

---General Overall Conclusion---

Good, but didn't look professionally done.

---Side Note---

I got 35!

Sispri responds:

Spend enough time, haha he spent like a year writing this. Thanks anyways :P

[Simpsons Quiz]

Well...

Graphics weren't fantastic, but nor were they terrible...
The grammar needs to be improved, otherwise it won't look professional. Even a simple typo ruins the game....
Make the questions a bit more general knowledge. How many people are gonna know such obscure facts such as Homer's weight? I just guessed.

Shadov16 responds:

im new here

[Chatterbot]

hmm

I don't mind it, but you need to do something whereby you do summin that the chatterbot reply goes away if you answer something it doesnt know...and try to work on the design a bit....but itwasnt as horrible as everybody is making it out to be....

Dark-Muse responds:

Yes, i dont know how to do that...